my persuasive writing

Dear mum and dad 

I really wanted a puppy. Can you buy me one?.

Reason one. When I always come back from school I'm always sad because I miss my friends.

Reason two. It will be really nice if you do give me a puppy.

Reason three. I will take care of it and do everything.

Reason four. I will train him or her and make him become a guard dog.

I hope you could buy me a puppy. Thanks for reading.

From Ryan.